Character Development- Debt

Family debt forced mothers and fathers to surrender their children to the state run Office of Financial affairs. As commodities of the state, children could be bought and sold until the age of 18. By law, the collectors could gather children to satisfy unpaid debt using any means necessary.

Her head ached, her eyes swollen from hours of crying. She pleaded her case and promised to sell a kidney but it was too late. She looked through the 8 foot high chain link fence as the guards loaded her son onto the truck. The boy was crying. He begged not to go. She yelled out his name and cried “I Love you”. Her voice drowned out by the other grieving parents.

2 Responses

  1. It is always the children who suffer the error of our ways and then there are those parents who fall short due to being layed off for Pete’s sake! This prompted worlds of thought, here, Marsha.

    1. @leasliepaints, I would agree. Its the children that suffer the most. I think this is going to be the central idea of the story perhaps.

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