Character Development: The Waitress

The moment the door chimed, she knew a retriever had walked into the diner. They all looked the same with their black suits, badges and firearms displayed on their belts. He walked to the counter and took the first available seat. “What can I get you?” She asked. “Just Coffee and toast.” he replied as he fidgeted with the non-functioning tracking device.

She listened for the opening and closing of the back door as the young couple escapes detection. “You look like you could use a hardy meal. The boy in the back makes a tasty breakfast platter. Let me serve that up for you” she slaps the counter to get his attention. “It’s on the house.”

2 Responses

  1. You are getting a lot accomplished. The character studies are good too. And, I like the new look of your blog. :) You’ve been busy!

    1. @Jeannie, I am indecisive about the look of this blog. I can’t decide what I like. You might find it changing from day to day. Sorry! As for the character studies, I am writing one day at a time and waiting for inspiration.

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